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WingZ
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:43 pm    Post subject: Commentary Reply with quote

This was my winning entry in the 2007 Short Story Contest. It's also semi-autobiographical in that the events described herein never happened but the context and the players are as I remember them.

I used the second person to try to make the reader feel more involved. It's a gimmick, to be certain, but one that works on ocassion.


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